Oznedabar's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bowser's plan]

Is it carnaval yet?

Yay! That's dutch, I like the thoughts behind this, so many times I've walked through browser's castle and thought, why is there a button at the end of the bridge? Or why did you build 8 castles? And other stupid things

[Grand Theft Semi-Auto]

Work on the audio

You should work a bit more on the audio, the animations weren't bad and the plot wasn't good, the sounds was bad

[The Woes of Marsh]

Confused

Like HexWasabe said, you covered the message with garbage, he's right. He gets a book to get away from the monsters, but it doesn't work, and then he wakes up in a classroom wich wasn't a classroom and there's that jester from the poster wich has no reason nor motivation to hunt the little kid and this girl pops out of nowhere, then that thing pops open and the clown is gone.

Overal a 8 for the animation and what should've been the story, but -2 for the confusing elements and lack of sound.

I pretty much agree with HexWasabe

[Pokemon kanto memories]

Wasn't all that bad

But it could go with a being a little bit more up-tempo

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[Aerial Gunning]

Good animations

although the walking looks a bit weird, and the story actually doesn't interest me, this has very good graphics, good plot, nice and and good animations, the choise of music was well chosen too. I can not whait untill you release another flash animation. also, who won the bet? you or your boyfriend?

Draconianspirit responds:

ahh my boyfriend won the bet. I was sure Newgrounds would blam this.

And oh god, this animation is SO corny. xDD like it was my first one though, so I can't be too harsh.
I'm also working on a solo flash project at the moment for my end of the year grade....I would do more, but unfortunatly my computer is a royal piece of shit. (just needs more ram to be honest I'm running at 505mb....)

But yeah, thanks for your kind score, and your honesty, and comments. I really appreciate it.

And keep your eyes out for that new animation! With any luck I'll have improved not just with graphics but also stroyline as well.

[There She Is!! final step]

dissapointing

I surely like the animation and the overall plot, but after part 4, I thought part 5 would be a deep end, but this was a bit too easy.
Good animation though

[Final life, Episode 1]

Omg we're going to hit the ceiling!

although the graphics weren't that good, the flash was funny and all the short parts came together in the end, the intro was good too. this is much better than work I've seen of more experienced flash artists. also, keep on practicing