Oznedabar's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Notice of Termination]

one word

AWESOME! I reall liked ur graphics, and the animations were good, but above all, you created a critical view of the world of today. you'll get on the frontpage I think.

DeweyGland responds:

I was going for a "rough sketch" approach. Next one maybe I'll pare the visuals down even further. Thanks!

[ninja turtle dance]

too plain

4 pictures and a song don't make a good flash. especially if they look bad.
next time, you should make a reasonable flash with a story, animations, and maybe a preloader

MrAngryFace responds:

Done that

[First Commentor's Dream]

they deleted what?

what did they delete? the first comments?
anyway, thank god you made this flash, I really hate those lifeless persons who only post first...
this flash was kinda short though, but I can't do better.
I once made something for kris-wilson too, he faved it, the next day it was seen over 3000 times...

Yay for critical people like you, we need more people like you

mrkomiks responds:

Yeah haha Kris linked to this when I put it on deviantART and within a few hours it was on the front page.
They deleted the actual submission because I used copyrighted music in it.
And thanks, I appreciate that :D

[mario bros 3 movie]

unnatural

marios movements were a bit unnatural, he jumped a bit weird and the jokes were kinda cheesy, it's got potential though. Try polishing it up a bit, better graphics, remove the spelling mistakes, and make the text between mario and goomba go by itsself, withouth having to click "next".

Figter responds:

Yeah, looking back at this now 7 years later, i dont even remember wtf i was doing, however i belive this was my first time actually converting sprites to symbols and making symbol animations.
Atleast i learned not to do the mistakes i did here again.

[Creature of night part 2]

nothing happens

well, nothing happens...
if u wanna update art, u should be at dA, not on newgrounds

Little-Red-Bear responds:

Things do happen in it.

[How Not to Time Travel.]

Awfull graphics, great storyline

the graphics are awfull, nothing fits together, but on the other side it could've been worse. The story is awesome! really awesome, I love it! especially the end was good, we could use more people like u on newgrounds

AlexTraynor responds:

Thanks dude.

Ultimately, I can't draw, so this is what I came up with. Personally, I think the Pixels over Still Images thing works pretty well, but ultimately, since it moves so fast the art doesn't matter much.